Answer:
The first sentence needs a capital letter.
In the 5th line, "camp" doesn't need to be capitalized, and a period or exclamation point is needed at the end instead of a question mark.
In the eighth line, "Sixteenth" doesn't need to be capitalized.
On the ninth line, no commas are needed.
On the tenth line, "Inspiration" needs to be capitalized since it's part of the name.
On the last line, no comma is needed.
