Answer:
Looks good at the end I would replace it with Now having different recourses other than that looks good
Explanation:
Avoid burying a great thesis statement in the middle of a paragraph or late in the paper. Be as clear and as specific as possible; avoid vague words. Indicate the point of your paper but avoid sentence structures like, “The point of my paper is…”
The quality of being magnificent. Like glory, or elegance. Hope this helps ya out! :)
-Ella
Newspeaks made to keep people from forming thoughts