The author would use a close narrative style
Not effective it gives way too much unnecessary information. For example, it should include what side his coming from, his costume and so on.
I will defeat you yelled the man too
Answer:
You could add futher punctuation and contractions. This sentence isn't grammatically correct either, as it's missing a conjuction.
Explanation:
We're very proud of our school, and we would like to give you a glimpse into the acedemic lives of our students.
You could also write the sentence without the conjuction, but it would have to be broken up into two separate thoughts.
Ex: We are very proud of our school. We would like to give you a glimple into the acedemic lives of our students
