Revise by yourself then ask someone else to revise the writing. It would be good to have someone with a different thought process than you. That person will normally spot out other things in the writing you might have not noticed.
Don't be afraid to make big changes in the writing! If you do not like a paragraph and wish to delete then it's ok, you can also rewrite the paragraph as you see fit or you can move it around to a different place in the writing. You can also do that before making small changes like grammar, spelling, and formatting.
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1. A) The writer has grown up alone and considers it an unbearable feeling.
2. A) The girl is hurt for the first time by love and it is the most painful.
3. B) Compound. The sentence is joined by the conjunction "and".
D) He believes that the person at the reference desk will best be able to help Saul find what he needs.
Carson is concerned about the use of synthetic pesticides. Her book describes the harmful effects of pesticides on the environment and is highly credited for helping launch the environmental movement. She was a biologist, ecologist and American divulger. With her research she showed the devastating effects of pesticides and DDT on wildlife.
