here is the sentence corrected
Mary likes to play with her cat.
and the the words you needed to correct is (like) and you needed to add a period
Free verse i think but might be wrong
Answer:
Yes but there's a mistake.
Mistake: Some where in the middle
It says "Oh hey, my im Osric, we better get started".
You have to fix Oh hey, my im Osric to, "Oh hey, I'm Osric".
But, other things are that this is very creative, it mentions words like, "Vividly, rare, miniature, rigid, desolate and lingered. These are very creative words.
And yes, thanks for that awesome lil' story!
Answer:Parallelism calls attention to Roderick’s fear.
Repeated phrases make Roderick seem anxious and terrified.
Parallelism helps show that Roderick has felt haunted for a long time.
Parallelism creates a dark mood from something that never ends.
