Suspense in stories is built step by step, in a slow way, creating an atmosphere of uncertainity and carrying the reader with you to the place where you want to take him, if you give the reader an exciting action when you are trying to build suspense the reader will completely forget the suspense you were trying to build and loose the mindset needed.
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