<span>The
United States sent forces to what area of the world in the mid 1990's to stop
ethnic cleansing to Yugoslavia or Bosnia. “Ethnic cleansing” is the attempts to
rid off unfavored ethnic group through deportation, displacement or even mass
killing, to create a homogeneity of a certain area. This was popularized during
1990’s during the breakage of Yugoslavia. </span>
Okay, here’s what I’ll do for you. I’ll answer your questions in a few words, and I want you to make sure the answers are longer than the ones I give you. 1) This paragraph does not flow at all. 2) The rhythm is very choppy. 3) The most important ideas are when she moves to the West Coast because it gives more detail on her life. The least important is her childhood and how she is brought up because it hardly talks about it. 4) The ideas aren’t well connected because it just states facts and doesn’t expand on them. 5) The relationship is basically what ever happened next in her life, no detail. 6) I would add more detail and make the sentences less choppy. This should help you rewrite the paragraph.
Hi there!
We know that the sentence says, "The truck raced around the corner and out of sight". So not that when the word "and" is put into a sentence like this 1, it's formally being used as a conjunction also know as compound. It has brung 2 phrases into 1 sentence! So it's obvious your answer would be:
A. Compound sentence
Hope this helps and have a fantastic day!
