Question

Can you please help me with writing a introduction to a short story about a race. Start in the action using your senses to describe the scene.
Using the words: perched, zoom, revved, dwarfed, convoy.

Thanks​​

Answer 1

Answer:

I perched on my seat, as I revved up my engine. I was anxious waiting for the race to start,as soon as I heard the horn my car zoomed,and I was gone. It was a convoy of race cars battleing for first place. Some cars seemed dwarfed compared to the rest of them.

 I was steering around in my car just hitting the final lap. There was one car ahead of me, so I revved up my engine in hopes of cattching up. I was so busy trieng to win I hadnt noticed the obvious sign I was pushhing my car over its limits. As I was cutting it close with the other race I heard a loud pop. I tried to steer my car,but it began losing control. I looked up only to see the wall. Then everything went dark

Explanation:

I'm sorry if this was to much,or it wasant what you needed. I am only in middle school and tried to sound like a highschooler.