Revise this passage so that it includes at least one compound sentence. Your revision should enhance the style and flow of the t

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3 years ago

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Revise this passage so that it includes at least one compound sentence. Your revision should enhance the style and flow of the t

ext without changing the overall meaning.
I walked up to the door. I rang the bell. I asked if Ricky was home. Ms. Lasko said Ricky was fishing with his Aunt Bertha. Fishing sounded like a good idea. I went home to get my pole and bait.

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Nookie1986 [14] · Answer 1 · 2022-12-26T10:50:14+03:00

Nookie1986 [14]3 years ago

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Answer:

I walked to the door and rang the bell. I asked if Ricky was home and Ms. Lasko said that Ricky went fishing with his aunt Bertha. I thought that fishing sounded like a good idea and decided to go fishing myself.

Explanation:

Kay [80] · Answer 2 · 2022-12-26T11:50:42+03:00

Answer:

I walked to the door and rang the bell. I asked if Ricky was home and Ms. Lasko said that Ricky went fishing with his aunt Bertha. I thought that fishing sounded like a good idea and decided to go fishing myself.

Explanation:

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