A catalog is a List of goods or services on sale with their description and prices published as a printed document, or as an electronic document, and like say you get a magazine from walmart it is just things for sale nothing else
Here in hawaii, it doesnt snow :(
Okay. So. First of all, rlly nice story =D I'm glad you got what you wanted. Now, to the point.. at first, I started to list every point where i thought you can change, but to be honest, and i mean no offense when i say this, but i think itll take me a very long time and a printed out version to mark it up so i think ill jjust give u a couple of tips. I hope they help.
- you dont exactly have any main idea going... only after reading the entire thing did i understand what "the battle" was and why you were anxious to get the results. you should clarify in the beginning what it is youre talking abt. a sentence like " Sixth grade had just started, and already I had begun to lose focus. My brain seemed to constantly drift towards other, more important things; like the upcoming custody battle between my parents over my brother and I."
-dont use the same word over and over again. try not to use it more than twice in one paragraph, it becomes repetitive, and a little annoying to read. An example: '<span>That battle was cemented in my head, all I could do was think about that battle.', I would change the second "battle" to "it"... you can do the same to other sentences, just look up synonyms and replce them, itll mean the same thing.
- Also, words like "socializing" might be too strong a word to use.... you can put 'talking' lol... its important to remember that you dont always have to use big words, and especially when youre writing a personal narrative, you should stick to ones you use on a day to day basis... save the big ones for formal essays :)
- the tenses seem to change throughout the story.... you start out correctly. in the past tense, and then u use a verb in the future tense, such as "will happen"
- don't add details you dont need or dont support the main idea... like the part about forgetting your brother. its just a side detail. or u can change how u introduce that detail. instead of the two or three sentences about forgetting him, u can just write " I was so anxious and excited to find out what the results were that i forgot to pick up my younger brother on my way back home from school, and ended up having to go all the way back to get him, prolonging the suspense."
If you want more specific details on where to change exactly what, i suggest you go to someone in person, they might be able to help you more. Best of luck! </span>
Answer:
The meaning of the poem "The Choice" is that the narrator is describing two men one rich and one poor man. The rich man offers an expensive dresses to make her look like a queen but the poor man actually cares about her. She picks the poor man. by dorothy parker
or the choice by Robert morgan
Sometime in the second half of the 21st Century, when the earth was almost destroyed, a spacecraft visits an abandoned city between two hills. In it are captain Starglyn and Suncon, the Celestial Geologist. They are studying the possible causes of the destruction of this city. Having studied a meteorite that broke away from the earth in 2048, Suncon has learnt that men on the earth had themselves caused their end. Even though men knew they were destroying the earth by polluting, cutting down forests and emitting dangerous gases, they didn’t stop such activities. They knew what was right and what was evil, but, fools, they chose the evil way. Two aliens, Starglyn and Suncon, landed on a stretch of meadow between two hills that face a crumbling city. The city was once a prosperous one but over population and overconsumption of natural resources brought decay to the city. All died, man and animal. The city was rendered lifeless.
Explanation:
I didn't know which the choice you meant so I wrote both The second one you probably have to put in your own words tho.
The following passage presents earth-diver creation story.
Answer: Option B.
Explanation:
In the above mentioned story we can see that how when the Wise Badger was unable to retrieve the mud, Brave Muskrat was sent to get the mud and he succeeds. Later they created an island out of mud.
Such stories are called as earth-diver creation story where an animal is usually send into the water in search of sand or mud and out of which they build habitat land. Such stories depicts how earth is formed from mud, sand, or dirt.
