Hello!
I don't find the paragraph to be too wordy at all. I don't understand the entire context of the paragraph, only because I don't know the topic that it is written on. Despite this, I was still able to follow the meaning of the paragraph.
Something that I did notice is that you have one run-on sentence in your paragraph. You wrote "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture, she photobombed a family picture, they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original and didn't want her in it, she cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
Instead, you could reword it into multiple different sentences to make the idea complete. I would recommend you turn this section into: "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture. She photobombed a family picture and they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original one and didn't want her in it. She cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
I hope this helps you! Have a lovely day!
- Mal
Are there any multiple choices for this question? Since there isn't, I'll propose a few.
"Karen felt a great connection with nature when she went hiking."
"Karen felt a great attachment with nature when she went hiking."
"Karen felt a great understanding (of) nature when she went hiking."
And if this is a multiple choice question, please list the choices.
Answer:
Oof I haven't done these in a while but I'm pretty sure the preposition here is the word "Under"
Explanation:
Prepositions are basically words that connect/have a relation to another word in a clause, they show the relationship between a Noun and Pronoun.
Some other prepositions can be:
- Across
- Above
- Beside
- Between
- For
- In
- Off
- Toward
- Off
I hope it helps, from what I remember I think the answer is correct!
Answer:
ONo I have not told Laura about the surprise!
Explanation:
because ONo is an interjection that displays a strong feeling or emotions
