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zimovet [89]
2 years ago
6

Fix this paragraph/sentence to make more sense and make it sound better. how can you rephrase this?

English
2 answers:
Olin [163]2 years ago
7 0

Here are some alterations made to the original--I hope they help!

This poor girl never had a chance to share her love with another person. Like the boy, her heart played with others and broke many, many times. However, the girl did not let the pain keep her down. She got up, and she got up stronger than she was before. But the love she had now every day made her feel as though she was drowning.

jeyben [28]2 years ago
7 0
Although, the girl hadn’t ever had her chance to share her love with another being. Like the boy, her heart had been hurt many times before but she wouldn’t let her pain hold her down. she stood taller time after time. the love she had now though gave herself the feeling of drowning
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