Answer:
Cheesy adjectives and add many many unnecessarily fluffy descriptions
Explanation:
All you need to do is maybe replace "felt happy" with "her heart pounded with happiness"/"walked down the school hallway" to "excitedly waltzed down the hallway and into the basking rays of the radiant sun" or something of the such and some dialogue lines in between Denise and her mom.
I think you'll be fine for vivid descriptions and strong imagery as long as you elaborate on Denise's feelings a bit more. I'll give you some bits you can use: "a warm smile", "stomach fluttered", "'I'm proud of the results of my hard work!'"
Anything cheesy should be perfectly enough to satisfy your teacher.
(Apologies that I have not given you a paragraph to copy-paste. Hopefully these pointers can guide you a bit :))
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A pair of words that describe a noun
The answer is text document.
Video clip - it's a video, you can't print it
sound file - it's a sound, you can't print it
digital image - *digital*, not printed
It should be noted they when writing an article, it's important to address one's point effectively.
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Writing an article.
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An article simply means a piece of writing that is written for a larger audience. It's usually written in order to illustrate a particular point.
In this case, the following are required:
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The heading or title of the article.
- The opening paragraph of the article.
- The body of the article which should contain information regarding the topic.
- The conclusion which is the ending paragraph.
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