Changing the sentence from a very long sentence into a short and choppy helps the suspense by not giving the reader a lot of information and making them really think and wonder.
For example:
"The stranger watched, a look in his eyes and this feeling spread throughout my body."
or
"There was a man watching, his blue eyes had this look in them that made me shiver with fear. His pale face held no emotion and made him seem as if he was just a corpse standing on his own."
The second one might sound better, yes, but the second one really makes you think and really builds the suspense.
"Who is this stranger? What does he look like? What feeling spread throughout their body?"
So instead of knowing a lot about this stranger, you know little to nothing and it really makes you want to know more, and definitely build the suspense.
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Explanation:
C) For all of these reasons, Kale should be added to everyone's diet as a tasty, healthy staple food.
This is because A) isn't a conclusion sentence it'd either be in the paragraph, or not at all because it's irrelevant since it's all about Kale. For B) again it's not a conclusion sentence because it's not something you'd end you paragraph with. It'd be in the paragraph not at the end. D) wouldn't be the best option either because you're trying to convince you're readers to eat Kale. Leaving C) as you best option because it's briefly summarizing your paragraph and it's more appealing to the readers as opposed to the other options.
The correct answer is C.
In this excerpt from "The Night" Elie Wiesel's is setting the story on the cattle train in which the jews from Sighet were transported to the Auschwitz concentration camp.
Wiesel and his family were transported, along with 80 more people. There was little to no space in the train, so they had to take turns to sit. They were traveling under the scorching sun with no water to calm their thirst.
