Question

Correctly punctuate and capitalize the following letter. to whom it may concern in regards to the memorial day fiasco aboard your cruise ship star princess we would first like to offer our sincere apology for our part in the mishap while we do not plan on taking legal action against you or the moroccan authorities we are requesting an apology in english this time from both parties to avoid another waterloo captain Johnson may just want to remember a few key items

Answer 1

The corrections are in bold fonts.

To whom it may concern;

 

 In regards to the Memorial Day fiasco, while you are aboard your cruise ship Star Princess. We would first like to offer our sincere apology for our part in the mishap. We do not plan on taking legal action against you or the Moroccan authorities, we are requesting an apology in English, this time from both parties to avoid another Waterloo. Captain Johnson may just want to remember a few key items.

Answer 2

Answer:

To Who It May Concern:

In regards to the Memorial Day fiasco aboard your cruise ship, “Star Princess.”  We would first like to offer our sincere apology for our part in the mishap.  While we do not plan on taking legal action against you, or the Moroccan Authorities, we are requesting an apology in English this time from both parties to avoid another Waterloo. Captain Johnson may just want to remember a few key items.

Explanation:

Use punctuation:

1. before coordinating conjunctions - or, nor, but, and etc that link independent clauses.
2. capital letters at the beginning of proper names.
3. capital letters at the beginning of a sentence.
4. use comma to separate dependence clause when a negation ends the sentence.