This paragraph is super... choppy. It needs to be more fluid. Also, the hook is, well, not present. They have a good start with "Growing flowers is one of my happiest childhood memories." You should build more on this idea of why gardening makes you happy. Through these memories you could share what you gain from gardening, and why you should stop thinking just about the time it takes but also the profit you can earn. To get rid of this "choppiness" you connect through the memories.
Hope this helps!
C.) Desk could be that..........
According to Churchill, the continuation of British life as it is currently known is at stake in the battle against Germany. The lengthy traditions of Great Britain are a stake
Answer:
sure
Explanation:
Bran Hambric was found locked in a bank vault at six years old, with no memory of his past. For years, he has lived with one of the bankers, wondering why he was left behind — until one night, when he is fourteen, he is suddenly confronted by a maddened creature, speaking of Bran's true past and trying to kidnap him.
In the start of Act 5 of Twelth Night, Antonio got mad at
Cesario--whom he still mistakes as
Sebastian, because Cesario agrees that Antonio seemed like a crazy person. Antonio
saved him from Sir Toby and Sir Andrew, yet Cesario was indifferent to him when
he was arrested.
