It contains an unwarranted shift in person because it goes from saying, " one" to saying,"He"
Answer:
And in walked my sister. (enough said)
Explanation:
In walked my sister. She wanted to play with me AGAIN! I was trying to do my homework and she followed me all the way upstairs. That kid is a wiz at this sneaking stuff I tell ya! I hid under my sheets, but she stll saw me. oH sNaP I have to find somewhere else to hide quick! She ran into the hall- "MoMmY! SHES NOT PLAYING WITH MEEEEE!!!!" Where to hide!? I think I should pack some stuff and go into hiding. - no time! - Shes coming back into the room! I quick snatched up my phone and computer, and dashed under my bed. Some days I really don't like having siblings.
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l think it is because he is scared
Answer:
"Writing gives us the time to consider how our words might be received. It gives us a way to thoughtfully craft our messages."
Explanation:
This excerpt implies that writing will help people communicate more effectively by taking time to think more about what they are saying instead of just saying it.
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