Question

Read a key findings paragraph from an informative report on ocean pollution. Discarded plastics in our oceans are a significant source of climate change. As these plastics float in the oceans, sunlight and heat cause them to release greenhouse gases. These greenhouse gases cause the planet to warm. Preventing plastic from getting into the ocean will consequently lessen the release of greenhouse gases worldwide.
How could this paragraph be improved?
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the addition of commentary
the inclusion of supporting evidence
the addition of a topic sentence
the inclusion of a recommendation

Answer 1

I think the answer is to do the addition of commentary