The most obvious fault of this paragraph is the lack of punctuation marks. The entire paragraph is one sentence, when there are supposed to be periods, commas, and other punctuation marks to separate them. This makes this paragraph one run-on sentence, which is grammatically incorrect.
To help build interest into the climax of the story, giving the story its thrill.
Body means another living organism i’m pretty sure
(This is about a tiger, haha)
Its claws were so sharp, so they realized it's too dangerous to risk their lives to approach the tiger.
