Which revision of the passage best connects ideas and adds variety? Running is great exercise, or it is an inexpensive activity.
You can run on a treadmill. You can run outdoors. You should not, therefore, run on icy roads. Running is great exercise. Running is inexpensive, yet you can run on a treadmill. You can run outdoors, however you should not run on icy roads. Running is great exercise, and it is inexpensive. You can run on a treadmill, or you can run outdoors. You should not run on icy roads, however.
A.) Running is great exercise, or it is an inexpensive activity. You can run on a treadmill. You can run outdoors. You should not, therefore, run on icy roads.
B.) Running is great exercise. Running is inexpensive, yet you can run on a treadmill. You can run outdoors, however you should not run on icy roads.
C.) Running is great exercise, and it is inexpensive. You can run on a treadmill, or you can run outdoors. You should not run on icy roads, however.
You haven’t attached the sonnet, so I can only guess at what you are referring to. But I believe I had this same sonnet last year in my English class, if it is the one describing his love, then it is C.
The answer is option A. After Evelyn's mother left for work, Evelyn read the list of her chores for the day: vacuum, walk the dog, and take out the trash.
