It is really a great story so far. What you need to do next is to write what did Ryker and Noelle do when they heard the footsteps above them. Did they investigate or did they leave the house? Since Ryker had already told Noelle that his brother was going to try and murder her, I don't think you should send them directly upstairs to see what or who made the footsteps. You should let the story continue a little more to be more dramatic. Don't let the story be a cliche like others would do. Perhaps, they could hide and wait to see who comes down. They could also catch the brother and then call the police or even the parents. You want the story to be different and have more excite to make the reader be wowed in the end.
The face is pretty distorted.
Edward Abbey says that Lake Powell which is formed by Glen Canyon Dam is not a lake but is a reservoir.This means that there is a constantly fluctuating water level based on the power needs of the system that the Dam is connected to. Also this power need is primarly focus of the orchestrators of the dam not the recreational possibilities that they publicize. <span>The drastic change of environment around the river, and the continuous changes of water level, had huge negative impacts on wildlife that were settled near it. The only thing noticeable around the edge of the water is the bathtub ring left by the change of water level.</span>
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Eurylochus escapes to inform him of the calamity. He angrily asserts that the men should flee Circe and ignore Odysseus' folly.
