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1 that Romeo was in love with Juliet and Romeo family has a feud between Romeo and juleit's family
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Ashley wanted a puppy. One day, he talked to his family for hours. At first, they did not believe had the time to care for the puppy. Then, Ashley created a puppy-care plan. His family <u>finally</u> agreed.
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Temporal (time) transitions are used to move the story forward and show the sequence of events. They indicate the frequency, duration, specific time, or beginning or end of something.
When used at the beginning of the sentence, transition words and phrases should be followed by a comma.
Bolded words are the temporal transitions that can be used to revise the given paragraph, while the underlined word <em>finally</em> is a temporal transition that had already been included.
A. giving a speech , because you are directly putting yourself into dialogue
<span>I happen to use this first Harry Potter book in one of my creative writing classes because you can learn so much about story structure from it. As Clarence explained well, the main conflict (the "dramatic question") revolves around the Sorceror's Stone of the title, yet a big goal of the book is to introduce the world of Hogwarts. The challenge here was to make the book dramatic even though the main antagonist, Voldemort, is not in Harry's face until near the end. The way she does it is come up with other, lesser antagonists, including the Dursleys, Draco Malfoy, some of the professors, especially Snape, and Harry's opponents in Quidditch.</span>
