Writing Prompt: Write a response in which you agree or disagree with the following statement: "Teenagers are not responsible eno
ugh to drive when they are sixteen-years-old." Student's Introduction: While some sixteen-year-olds may seem immature, most are just as responsible as adults. Many of us help take care of our homes, look after our younger siblings, and assist with other adult duties. Teenagers should be given more credit and trusted with bigger responsibilities.
Rewrite the student's introduction so that it contains stronger claims, which are related directly to the prompt
Most sixteen-year-olds can behave like adults and are just as responsible as adults. We help take care of our homes, look after our younger siblings, and assist with adult duties. Teenagers should be given a lot more credit and trusted with much larger responsibilities.
Explanation:
Not really sure how to explain this... just add more emphasis and also add words like "a lot" "much" and stuff
