How could a change in emphasis BEST develop the events in this passage, making for a more interesting and exciting read? A) The author could spend even more time discussing the preparations for takeoff. B) The author could shorten details about McKee's preparations and give more details about the rocket flight and the adventures that took place during colonization of Saturn. C) The author could list and explain the different dials and switches in the cockpit to show how the advanced technology of the shuttle works, with plenty of intricate technical detail. D) The author could focus the story solely on McKee's careful preparation for the trip, noting what he had for lunch and the clothes he wore.
Eye of Heaven. This is a metaphor that refers to the sun. The phrase "too hot the eye of heaven shines" means the heat of the sun is too much. The symbolism is relative to the sun being round with rays that look like an eye and heaven refers to something in the sky that you look up to.
