Answer: The ball flew through the air and landed in the tree. I went ahead and climbed up to the tree and knocked out the ball. As soon as I hit the ball, a stray dog got the ball and ran towards a pile of boxes. The piles of boxes were filled with trash that smelled like tuna fish. I looked through the boxes and found the dog with their 8 puppies, which were about 3 weeks old. I then bought dog food for the puppies and also for the mother. After that I took them to the vet for a check up. Everything went well, I named each puppy after famous basketball players. I’ll never forget that amazing day.
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Answer:
B. She is Stephanie's character foil because she shows how responsible Stephanie is.
The correct answer from the choices given will be Beliefs. Beliefs are acceptance, perception, and conclusion. These are all beliefs that a person is responsible for. The correct answer is B.
