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Some people might say it is even good to mention incomplete projects, It's even better to have something already done. I would say that it would be fine to mention it, might even help.
The error is in the first sentence- “shine brightly” should be “shines brightly” because the subject is singular.
Is that the question? Because it seems like a title to the question and not the real question
<span>He's using them as examples of people who spoke up with their own opinions against the majority, even when it was dangerous to do so.</span>