I think that is when bethany saw all the other kids on the beach and having a good time. because bethanys mom said she couldnt go.
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Can someone pls give an example of networking in their own life experience. If at all you don't have any , you can include an example of what you want to do
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Looks Great! A few critiques...
In paragraph 1 i think you spelled socialize wrong.
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if so, try using this to write you essays next time...
K-key idea
E- evidence -1
A- analyze evidence( give your thoughts
T-transition-( i.e.- Continuing on,
E- Evidence -2
A- analyze evidence
L- link the paragraph all together
it really helps to keep everything organized and consistent. For your introduction, try using a hook, a bridge , and finally a thesis. A thesis should ALWAYS be the last sentence in your intro paragraph.
For your conclusion start of with your thesis, go into your Main ideas of the essay, and then give something for the reader to think about (clincher)
Hopefully this helped!!
The second little passage. A part in the quote is surrounded by parentheses.