Just take what you are going to talk about it your paper and summarize it. Make sure to put Down's Syndrome in your thesis though since that is the main topic.
The sentence that has a mismatch between subject and modifier is the last one - Shortly after entering the museum, the mummy caught Kim's attention.
The way it is written, the sentence means that the mummy entered the museum, when it actually refers to Kim.
This must mean that the patient must see to his or her own needs. The patient must be responsible of the consequences of his action. There may be times when the nurses and the doctor could only help to a certain length. The rest must be up to the patient because he or she owns his or her body.
