The biggest issue with this is that the first sentence is run-on, you should consider breaking it into smaller sentences, maybe by getting rid of the "and" after describing the mother, replacing it with a period and letting the father get a sentence of his own. Also, you could try "-on how happy the Railway family is. The story also uses detail on how nice the parents are-" something along those lines, just to break the run-on sentence?
This is minor, but at the end "creates a sense of perfection, by describing their house-" the comma before by isn't necessary, and can either be deleted, or you can rephrase like "a sense of perfection. The story does this by describing-"
I hope this helps! <span />
hats stands for headings, access, typography-the style and appearance of printed matter, and space
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(jacemorris04)
Answer:
17. A
18. A.
19. C.
Explanation:
(correct me if I'm wrong)
False but u might wanna wiat for more answers to make sure
