This passage is more about government and injurys
19:22 dunno how yu don’t know it unless there is more steps like yu have to simplify it
The author should use 1st person when speaking AS the character. 3rd person is when speaking FOR the characters, like, " Mary and Lynne ran across the field. "
Give an introductory but also use something catchy. personally, I'd says something like "My name is _____. it's an interesting name that you don't hear often. _____ means.." and so on.