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Answer:
Dorthea should identify herself with a different pronoun
Explanation:
When she introduces herself she uses myself. Which is incorrect hope this helped
Bring it in make sure you get your hook out there example do you like cats well this essay is about if cats are better is mind than dogs *cough, not really , cough* make sure you use words like well, then, however. and your sure to get a pretty good transition. Also, make sure it runs smoothly.