The metaphor adds to the passage the following:
. a description of the Cyclops’ eating habits
. a comparison between the Cyclops and a large land form
.a visual image of the Cyclops’ size
The Cyclopes are giant and huge creatures who were blessed by the Gods for food for their living. They don't want any visitors to come to their place. When Cyclops noticed that Odysseus and his men had arrived at his land, he captured them in his cave and treated them in the most inhospitable manner. He wanted to kill each of them but Odysseus tricked him and saved himself and his men from his captivity. The metaphor in the passage tells about the way the Cyclopes eat and the visual representation of their huge size.
Education is better than money because in order to get a good paying job you need to have a good level of education completed. If you drop out of highschool or just never completed it then you will never be able to get a high paying job without highschool level education.
There are no errors and there is one pronoun which is “they”