For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Answer:
The question is asking about <u><em>you</em></u> and <u><em>your</em></u> life.
Explanation:
Answer:
Probably C
Explanation:
They called it a "summer colony" which isn't commonly said... But they wore bathing dresses too which is something that women did years ago, so if not C then A.
Being on time and organization so that you can be a reliable person
Is there a passage we can read to further understand this?
