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Natali [406]
3 years ago
12

This poem is for a project i need to know if it needs anything changed and how good yall think it is the poem is called you :

English
1 answer:
VARVARA [1.3K]3 years ago
4 0

Answer:

See explanation for answer.

Explanation:

Tips:

Maybe instead of saying "ain't nothing I want more than your love" say "I want nothing more than your love" for a classier and more professional line.

I would reccommend taking out "you're a catipiller, you're becoming a beuatiful butterfly" because in my opinion it almost seems like your belittling the person you love. Try using a different metaphor.

"ill love you to the day that I die" should be "I'll love you till the day that I die" which I might also change because it sounds very similar to a line in the song "Piano Man" by Billy Joel. Just a tip.

When you say "love is all I need, love is all I want" maybe say "your love is all I need, your love is all I want"

Advice:

Try creating stanzas, it will help your poem look more finished.

Compliments:

I love the comparison "like roses you have thorns" and "like a bull I have horns" cause that's basically you admitting that you know neither of you are perfect.

I love your ending, it's very well thought out.

I hope I helped!

Have a lovely day!

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