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The light of hissing gas lamps lit up the old bookshop. Down below street level, Jeremiah Franklin looked up at the translucent street slab, sensing, more than hearing, raindrops spattering the paving stones, their noise barely perceptible through the door and windows above. It was four o’clock on a deadly dull Wednesday afternoon in December and Jeramiah felt inclined to close early, though the voice of his father, Harrold, rang in his ears, “Stay open to the advertised hour, lad, and people will trust your word … and your prices!” The bell rang and, before Jeremiah could ascend to the ground floor, a woman with a wet umbrella and an equally wet child, a young boy of about six, began to descend the stairs to the basement and Jeremiah’s desk. “Good afternoon, do you have such a thing as an atlas of Mexico and the South Americas?” she enquired.
Explanation:
Brainlyist??? iw wrote this the other day for school but didnt use it hope it helps
Answer:
Clarity of thoughts and avoid redundancies.
Explanation:
Writing is a creative process and thus it takes a lot of effort to create an impressive work without any huddle. And to write a clutter-free work, it is essential to have the clarity of thoughts as it would give the structure and order to the work. Following the steps of recursive writing which includes prewriting, drafting, revising and editing would provide several opportunities to assess the work and provide an organized and effective form to it by removing the unnecessary words, phrases, etc. Don't repeat the things over and again which have already been said and delete the unnecessary details that may dip in the readers and consequently divert them from the intended message or goal.
Not to use an I voice, rather make it definite.
<span><em>Example of what not to do...</em>
</span>"I believe that India has is too overpopulated because of [...] and actions need to be taken swiftly."
<span><em>Example of what to do instead...</em>
</span>"India is overpopulated due to [...] and actions need to be taken swiftly."
Answer:
A. The sentence gives an opinion.