Can someone please read my essay and please tell me what words or sentence that I wrote it wrong.

English

1 answer:

ivann1987 [24]3 years ago

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Rewritten:

My Mother is my idol for me. She does everything she can for her family. She teaches me important things. She looks like a beautiful shining star in the sky. I want to be like her. She takes care of our family the best she can. When i am sick, she takes care of me and hopes i get better. She loves me and worries for me. Today i will study hard for her. She makes my family feel warm. I am always happy to be with her. These are the reasons why i love her. These are the reasons that makes her my idol.

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