. Brutus is a well-respected man, and as his brother-in-law, Cassius should not be manipulating Brutus in order to achieve his own ambition. Maybe it helps ,Sorry if not. :) :( :)
1. Temperatures RISE in the summer.
2. The fire REACHED the edge of the city.
3. It's BITTERLY cold outside.
4. He WARNED us to stay inside.
5. The hurricane HIT the coast. (I am like 99% sure on this one)
6. The STRONG winds caused problems. (Also like 99% sure)
7. Power LINES were on the ground.
8. The city took many years to RECOVER from the disaster.
Advised
behaving as someone, especially the speaker, would recommend; sensible; wise.
It’s looks great very detailed and well put together.
Explanation:
there is a comma before "and" which is the first error..
2nd error is that the word bright has a comparative form; "brighter". which is supposed to be used instead of "more bright"