Answer:
Re: instructor
Subject: Exam Grade.
Dear instructor,
I am contacting you to discuss my exam grade. I am really stumped with the grade I received and would like to know the reason why my rating was 0.
I have really worked very hard to take this exam and was expecting a higher grade. That is why I need to know what has gone wrong with my answers so that I can improve or perhaps do a review in case it was a mistake in the correction.
Greetings you sincerely,
Terry.
Explanation:
At first look, we can see that Terry is writing an email that is too informal, without a structure and with a language that is not appropriate for the person who is going to receive it.
Therefore, what must be improved in this email is its structure, its language and the way in which it is expressed towards a superior.
The way to write a formal email correctly is as follows:
Think carefully about the subject of the message
Make a timeless greeting adapted to the recipient
Synthesize the content to the maximum
Don't forget to say goodbye
Sign the mail
Before hitting 'send', check your message
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