While you are proofreading the text for grammar mistakes, you could evaluate the text by asking yourself the following questions.
 
What is the main idea?
What is the writer trying to say?
What rhetorical devices does the author use?
Did the writer organize his essay so that the reader will not be confused?
Was the writer able to bring about his point?
Did the introduction help start off the essay?
Did the writer conclude appropriately?
Did the writer use appropriate transitions to link ideas?
It will be hard evaluating and proofreading an essay at the same time as humans cannot multitask. I suggest doing them both separately.
        
             
        
        
        
The second Choice because it makes more sense
        
             
        
        
        
Answer:
I think it's Voldemort
Explanation:
Voldemort is the villain who plays in Harry Potter. I think his backstory doesn't give him an excuse to what he became. He got orphaned at a young age like many others and allegedly couldn't love anything or anyone. But as he grew older, he became more evil and started using dark magic. His ultimate fear was death and believed in the deathly hallows. He killed lots of people without mercy, without have a second thought just to accomplish this. And he killed Harry's parents and tried to kill Harry at the age of 1 and failed. But ever since then, Harry was targeted each year at Hogwarts by him.
 
        
             
        
        
        
Answer:
NO 
Explanation:
No because you can dress the way you want to dress it just your personality that will difine you 
 
        
             
        
        
        
Answer:
1. gnaws means chews on
2.the poet's attitude toward the sea is one of fear.