Answer:
The author shows August's character and emotions through this line of thought.
He wants to have a normal life; he wants to go to school and make friends. However, he does not see how this could be possible. He is torn between what he wants and what he believes he cannot have because of his deformity.
This would help them learn more while at home, causing them to keep it fresh in their minds.
i don't see any mistakes except the (.) at the end of it. Your essay is truly amazing. Its shows your emotions and why you feel that way. not many people i know can write like this.
9.9/10 ( only counted off for the period)