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Rewritten; “My family says Seattle is a beautiful place to visit.” Or “My friends say Seattle is a beautiful place to visit.”
Dear sir.
I decided to write to him to present my qualifications for the post of Sales Executive.
My name is Avani Jain, born on March 8, 1994. Single and without children. I am graduated from the B.A. University with a double degree in business administration and social work, where I spent with credits of honor to merit in the first class. After graduation I started my master's degree in sales technology with an emphasis on information systems. During the master's degree I got involved in several independent companies which are listed in the annex. At that moment I built my experiences in developing campaigns, marketing, advertising and publicity.
In addition, I spent two years in Australia to perfect the English language, which I can speak fluently.
Regards,
Avani Jain
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