Stars are glowing balls of gas that erupt at times.
Answer:
Change the 'and' to 'but.'
Change 'a test' to 'any tests'
Explanation:
<u>You wrote:</u> My best subject is Spanish, and I haven't passed a test this month.
<u>After Changing:</u>
My best subject is Spanish, but I haven't passed any tests this month.
If you change it, it sounds more like you are unhappy about your Spanish skills and makes more sense.
I think you should talk about how he was very narcissistic and conceded, that plays an important role on how people should be that way. Or about how when he died how his people reacted and worshipped him even though he was dead. Or how he may have been cocky but when it came to fighting he made it fair. he wouldnt use a weapon if his opponent wasnt.
The supporting details should be included in the Body Paragraphs of an essay. The introduction is an introduction of what you plan to write about, and the thesis is included in the introduction where you specifically mention your main topics/points. However you elaborate on these in the body paragraphs and these elaborations are your supporting details. The conclusion is a summary of your essay and should not be introducing any new information.
In the story "The Cask of Amontillado, Montressor had led Fortunato in a family of catacombs. He had led him to a pile of skeletons and chained Fortunato's arm. No one knows what happened to Fortunato at the end. All they know is that Fortunato disappeared, and no one ever saw him again.
