An aspiring young entrepreneur decided to start a foundation to help all the needy.
This is an example of a sentence using both the word aspiring as well as foundation.
A thesis statement should tell the reader what the paper is about and also help guide the writing and keep the argument focused. In this paragraph, the best thesis statement is, "Time Management will give you the opportunity to have a non-complicated in your life, focusing on your life."
Thesis: "Time Management will give you the opportunity to have a non-complicated in your life, focusing on your life."
1. No worries
- Get a good night's sleep
- Start the day with vitality
2. Have set goals
- daily schedule- respect time frames for each activity
- not in a hurry
3. Planning
- Can check your goals in writing
- Able to add reminders to keep on with the goals' accomplishment
The paragraph is short, so the main points made are the three major supporting details. Then, using additional points from the paragraph, you can find minor supporting detail for each major supporting detail. The answer could vary slightly depending on one's interpretation of what is the most important in the paragraph, but generally these are the main ideas.
Note: I believe there may be a word missing in the thesis or the first sentence of the paragraph, after non-complicated and before in.
Not enough attention has been paid to the risks taken by Sherpas, who perform dangerous work for relatively low pay, and their deaths aren’t being given the same weight in the media as the Western climbers who hire them.
What is memorable about this essay is that the author includes the number sixteen, which is the number of Sherpa deaths that he mentions in the first paragraph.
Hope this helped!
