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it was a great abyss, the wind howled and cried making my hair slash sharply against my numb face. a beautiful bottomless abyss. above, the miserable, heavy clouds darken and close in as if they were a wolf hunting its prey. a colage of various shades of greys and blues encapsulate the sky. a shiver runs down my spine as the biting cold freezes my soul. the only sign of humans stepping foot here is a rotting wooden walkway, with the long repetitive years of the harsh wind and waves that explode comfortably against this wooden structure, it was eroding away, it was a cold and unrelenting picturesque scene of the past.
