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Paul wanted to save up money to go to prom this year he got a part-time job at the local mall,and to save up money to prom this year he got a part-time job
This sentence is a run-on sentence. Which sentence is the correct version?
In a forest of mixed growth somewhere on the eastern spurs of the Carpathians, a man stood one winter night watching and listening, as though he waited for some beast of the woods to come within the range of his vision, and, later, of his rifle. But the game for whose presence he kept so keen an outlook was none that figured in the sportsman's calendar as lawful and proper for the chase; Ulrich von Gradwitz patrolled the dark forest in quest of a human enemy.
The forest lands of Gradwitz were of wide extent and well stocked with game; the narrow strip of precipitous woodland that lay on its outskirt was not remarkable for the game it harboured or the shooting it afforded, but it was the most jealously guarded of all its owner's territorial possessions. A famous law suit, in the days of his grandfather, had wrested it from the illegal possession of a neighbouring family of petty landowners; the dispossessed party had never acquiesced in the judgment of the Courts, and a long series of poaching affrays and similar scandals had embittered the relationships between the families for three generations. The neighbour feud had grown into a personal one since Ulrich had come to be head of his family; if there was a man in the world whom he detested and wished ill to it was Georg Znaeym, the inheritor of the quarrel and the tireless game-snatcher and raider of the disputed border-forest. The feud might, perhaps, have died down or been compromised if the personal ill-will of the two men had not stood in the way; as boys they had thirsted for one another's blood, as men each prayed that misfortune might fall on the other, and this wind-scourged winter night Ulrich had banded together his foresters to watch the dark forest, not in quest of four-footed quarry, but to keep a look-out for the prowling thieves whom he suspected of being afoot from across the land boundary. The roebuck, which usually kept in the sheltered hollows during a storm-wind, were running like driven things to-night, and there was movement and unrest among the creatures that were wont to sleep through the dark hours. Assuredly there was a disturbing element in the forest, and Ulrich could guess the quarter from whence it came.
Successful monologues usually involve a great deal of
behind-the-scenes effort, as well as a lot of concentration and practice.
Structured monologues show the learner’s ability to organize and present
information on familiar and less familiar topics in simulated situations. When
delivering a structured monologue the key point is to organize your speech in a
logical, coherent and cohesive way. A monologue as any structured presentation
generally falls into three parts: the introduction, the main body and the
conclusion. Each of the parts plays an essential role with its unique function.
The introductory or the opening lines of the structured monologue are the most
important of all. They could help create the positive impression on the
listeners. Good way to start your speech is to say something that grabs the
audience’s attention, for example:
• A quotation from a famous/ well-known person;
• A rhetorical question;
• A strong, powerful
declarative statement;
• A scenario opening, which usually begins with
“Imagine...”. Do not forget to connect the opening lines of your speech with
the main thesis of the structured monologue. The body is the biggest part of
the speech, where the majority of information is transferred. This is the part
of the monologue where the main points should be made.
Physical- Dee is a light toned, full figured young lady. Her hair is better than Maggie's. Maggie was burned in a house fire, so she has some scars
Emotional- Dee is more confident than Maggie; on the other hand, Maggie is shy and withdrawn
Education- Dee has more education than Maggie
