To Help children avoid temptation. Out of sight, out of mind. Create an environment where self-control is consistently rewarded.
the mood is suspenseful because the reader is not sure when Montresor is going to kill Fortunado.
The revision that would help expand the ideas in the excerpt is <span>adding more specifics about the sailors' beliefs about the island.
</span>The author just mentions their beliefs briefly, but doesn't really expand on that topic, which may be relevant further down in the text. This is why I believe that adding such details is important to include in this essay to make it more detailed and easy to understand.
Is this like a story or something. Who is Johnny? You need to be more clear with your question or people wont get the chance to answer your question!? I would like to answer, just give me more info about your question and I will be able to answer. Thank you :)
