Answer:
Explanation:
Its pretty good, I would reccommend that you should change
"The echoes of demise reverberate throughout my ears." to "The echoes of demise reverberate in my ears."
"I have slash open my enemies, " to "I slash open my enemies"
"The scarlet hue of their corpses bows before me, " to "the scarlet hue of their corpses bow before me"
"But darkness’s claw clutches hold of my eyes, " to "But darkness’ claw clutches my eyes, "
"The coldness of the steel penetrates my muscles," to "The steel's coldness penetrates my muscles,"
also I don't really know what the And line is for.
I would go with the author points out that the eyes reveal the essential characteristics of a person.
This question is incomplete; here´s the complete question.
Read "Object Lesson" by Ellery Queen.
How is the clock used to create suspense and pacing in
the story?
Answer:
The time frame to solve the crime is established by Mr. Ellery Queen as what remains of the first period, which ends at 9:35. Being 8:56, that means that there´re 39 minutes to solve the mystery. Throughout that time, everyone keeps looking at the clock and the author provides exact information on how much time remains, creating pacing and suspense. Finally, Mr. Ellery solves it exactly at 9:35.
You have to take pictures of your spelling
If I understand what you’re asking, it should be how much milk do you drink, how many people live in Athens, how many times do you go to the park, how much are these boots, how much money do you spend.
