Two examples of alliteration would be “scared stiff” and “big bed”
“Raced” and “chased” both act as an example of assonance
I would say it gives the text a more rhythmic flow when reading making it more enjoyable for the reader
Hope this helps x
<span>There was a booming knock at the door and a louds hout.
"Open up!"
From inside came ther attleofalock,and then the door opened barely half an inch. A woman,dishevelled and clearly shaken,peered through hesitantly.
"Can I help you?"
Detective Stirland loomed large before her.He flipped open his ID badge.
"Where’s Joe,Mandy?"
"What’s this about?" she stammered.
Stirland applied his weight to the door and the woman stepped backwards as it swung open.
"I’ll ask the questions.We know he’s here."
Her eyes flitted from his face to the lounge door and back.
"Joe!"
She folded her arms defiantly,reluctantly.
"Joe, you’d better come out.The police are here."</span>
Answer:
Someone I admire is my cousin Laura. She’s five years older than me, so she’s 19 now and she lives in Bristol. She’s very friendly and confident and she’s got long, wavy, brown hair and greeny-brown eyes. She’s medium height, slim and very fit because she’s a dancer.
She’s been dancing since she was six years old and trains every day at her dance school. She wants to be a professional dancer, but it’s a very difficult profession because it’s so competitive. She often dances in shows and I’ve been to watch her several times. Her favourite type of dance is modern, which is sometimes a bit strange, but I love watching her dance.
Laura is very busy because she also studies photography at university. She’s a really good photographer and has taken lots of amazing photos of me and my family. Her photos have won a few prizes and last year one of her photos was in an exhibition at an art gallery in London.
Laura doesn’t have a lot of free time and she’s also trying to learn German because she wants to go to Germany next year to do a photography course. I think Laura is very hard-working and she deserves to become a professional dancer one day.
Explanation:
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An archetype is a regular character, an activity or a circumstance that appears to speak to such all inclusive examples of human instinct.
