The sentence that had correct sentence structure is
Before we were able to get financing we had to have the house appraised by independent appraiser
A reader might feel like they can relate to the situation that the writer is going through. They understand and therefor can relate emotionally to the situation.
In Shakespeare's time, a stage wasn't just one type of space; plays had to be versatile. The same play might be produced in an outdoor playhouse, an indoor theater, a royal palace—or, for a company on tour, the courtyard of an inn.
I can't think of four things but I was always taught to always cite everything. Even if you think something is an original idea or phrase, look it up and make sure and if someone else has said that just put it in your work cited because that could be considered plagiarism. Also always cite direct quotes
Douglass said Mr. Covey turned him into a brute. He felt horrible about himself and was left feeling broken.
