Answer:
WHAT THAT DOESNT MAKE ANY SENSE.
I went outside and what did I find?
A box to open. I hope no one will mind.
It was tied on top with a bow of ghastly red.
I examined it carefully as questions ran through my head.
I opened the box and gasped in wonder.
For inside was ancient plunder!
Hope I helped. Let me know if you want something different.
Not to use an I voice, rather make it definite.
<span><em>Example of what not to do...</em>
</span>"I believe that India has is too overpopulated because of [...] and actions need to be taken swiftly."
<span><em>Example of what to do instead...</em>
</span>"India is overpopulated due to [...] and actions need to be taken swiftly."